A tricky fellow,
the comma,
seemingly simple,
but no,
he’ll tie you in knots
and change your intent.
Eats shoots and leaves,
is the diet of
a placid animal.
But what of eats,
shoots and leaves?
See,
how potent he is.
Dangerous yet,
in the wrong hands.
Let’s eat grandma,
oh dear,
we didn’t mean it!
And careful with him,
in a list,
with his bedfellow ‘and’.
Errant, or present where
he should not be,
he twists and turns
your words
to his own decree.
Pingback: The Comma | Mere Thoughts
The comma is mine too, good post.
http://uncustomaryhousewife.wordpress.com/2014/06/30/a-tale-of-two-commas/
Pingback: Punctuation And Misfits | It's Mayur Remember?
Delightful poem! I have a most dangerous relationship with the comma. I actually have Lynne Truss’s little punctuation book, “Eat, Shoots & Leaves,” sitting on my bookshelf. Your post makes me want to pull it out and actually read it! 😀
Thanks for the appreciative comment Kimberley 🙂
Thanks for following me too 🙂